

Who tipped off the bad guys as to where they were? That one kept me guessing until the end.


The most interesting part was trying to figure out who was the bad guy, other than the obvious. Lots of thoughts with these people going on and on and on. Another was kind of funny, when Tim was musing about getting more deeply involved in the scene - as the paragraph went on, he first "couldn't comprehend", then later in the same paragraph "couldn't understand". Talking about all the people they'd snag who wouldn't be missed - junkies, wh*res, and b*tt boys. When the guys would be thinking to themselves (especially Tim) about what they were doing, there was a bit of repeat going on. My only problem was him getting into the heads of the characters. I guess it would fall in the "splatterpunk" category, if that still exists. It's certainly not great literature, and it's not even great horror.
